You need to go crazy with some breaks. The drums are just a tad simple for my taste, but I was always into that techy roller stuff. If you want, go to
www.thewickedshade.com and click on the word "scream" and you'll hear my choon. The drums are Emu. I sampled a break and layered it ontop of it's self. You'll get the idea.
The song, from an engineering stand point, is very good... the overall timbre of all the sounds is sort of... New Age sounding. It reminds me of "Beyond The Mind's Eye" kind of thing.
But, the thing is... no matter what kind of critizism you get... the only thing that is important is if you like what you did. If you do... then that is the point. Good track overall.
snh